Monday, September 24, 2007

Response: Audience for Essay #2

Who is your audience for this essay? In a posting, give us an overview of who your audience is, reasoning why this issue is so suitable for this audience, and finally give one example of how you addressed your audience in this draft.

--elizabeth

Essay continued

I forgot to add that my paper is suitable for the intended audience because it involves them. The adminsitration is the ones who are trying to eliminate the rollover plans and we, the students, are directly affected by the loss of money.

Essay

The directed audience of my paper is the BGSU administration and the students of BGSU. My essay discusses the expensive meal plans and how we should not be forced to purchase one and if we are forced to, our money should rollover. One way i paid attention to my audience was by citing a fellow student. Their opinion gives credibility to my essay and shows that most students are alike in the fact that we want more of a selection for food, some more healthy food, and our money to rollover to future semesters. Allowing the audience to take an active participation in the essay elminates some biases and keeps them reading.