Outline

I.Intro
A. Thesis: the check in policy at Bowling Green is not proficient nor effective at most residence halls on campus.
II.Campus safety
A.the importance
B. things that are put into action to make things safe
C. how students can make residence halls unsafe
III. Check in policy
A. talk about what it is
B.how it is supposed to be enforced
C. why it is not effective
IV. counterargument
A. the check in policy is fine
B. quote from students who feel the RA's are proficient
C. why some students feel that check in policy should not exists
V. Conclusion

Some things that i need to change about my paper is the organization of the whole thing. i need to make sure that i have a clear stand point on my argument. i also need to make sure that each paragraph transitions smoothly to next.