I. Introduction
A. students arent allowed to have roomies of different genders
B. It shouldn't matter what the gender of your roommate is
1. new experience
2. more diverse
3. create problems
II. Support
A. numerous benefits
1. sharing
2. different perspectives
III. Counter
A. distractions
B. jealous significant others
IV. Conclusion
A. better off
B. change some peoples feelings on life
I think I can add more detail about how different sex roommates could be diverse. Also I could include more examples or explain them more throughout my essay. Making my essay for connected and such is something else, I could do to help my essay become better.
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