Wednesday, September 26, 2007
Life without health insurance Q2
In any paper a personal experience add a sense of individualiy. In this exerpt Clark explains to the audience how a real life experience like this can really happen. If it had just been a written statistic people would not really see the harshness of it. If you show a real account of someone going through something as terrible as having no medical help throughout their life. I believe clark has shown a really hard aspect of her life, and the fact she wrote an entire story about the struggle she went through also shows how strong people can come out in the end.
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I agree with this statement that before the information given was just a statistic, her personal experience adds to the emotional aspect of the story. It shows that the facts were not just numbres and they can really happen to people and we must take precautions and prepare ourselves for anything, not walk through life thinking we are invisible.
i think your right with what you said. I agree with you 100%. It does add much emotion and I think the paper needed that so good job here.
I completely agree with the addition of emotion. It sets it up in a more conversational way that leads to the more serious statistics of it.
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