Thursday, September 27, 2007

Life without insurance

Her personal experience adds a lot more credibility to this debate. It is one thing for someone to speak on an issue that they believe in, and another thing for someone to speak on an issue that they believe in and have been through. This testimony helps to bring new light onto the situation because she is giving a first hand account of how health insurance has effected her life. People who read this article are more inclined to believe what she is saying because she has gone thought . I think that this testimony was a good addition to the article and makes the argument more valid.

2 comments:

Mike C. said...

I agree with how the personal experiences really add crediability to this argument. It makes you more willing to support it and listen more to her argument

The Fishman said...

i very much agree with your stance on personal experiences in writing. It adds to the entire reading experience and it makes it seem more real.